Dear frnzzz...(not a single follower :( yet )this week for you m posting a 'Poem'. A very small endeavour which came into effect years back. See m not Keats or Shelly, can't even dare to be...so plsssssss don't expect me to write something wow!!! You all have vouched that you will accept my writeups with all its fallacies ;) So here's this poem...one more thing I wanna add here that after you are thru with the poem pls don't mistake of thinking me a great lover...LOLzzz for, m not...Simply take "Art for Art's sake"
Here goes the poem...
I can’t describe what is love?
Neither can I understand what pleasure it gives or pain it takes…
For, my existence is still struggling to know the fragrance of love,
Depth of emotions, pain of being lonely…
But I can feel the throbbing of heart;
desperation for union,
never ending search for those pair of eyes…
That long desire to hug and being close for a moment…feeling forlorn standing amidst a huge crowd…
sensing my own self looking at the mirror…that long wait for a call, reading those few lines again and again…
Assorting words since long, but becoming speechless at that sight!
So profound feelings…so fervent desire… still in distrust, still in despair…
O my soul! O my heart! You answer me at last…
Is this love???
Here goes the poem...
I can’t describe what is love?
Neither can I understand what pleasure it gives or pain it takes…
For, my existence is still struggling to know the fragrance of love,
Depth of emotions, pain of being lonely…
But I can feel the throbbing of heart;
desperation for union,
never ending search for those pair of eyes…
That long desire to hug and being close for a moment…feeling forlorn standing amidst a huge crowd…
sensing my own self looking at the mirror…that long wait for a call, reading those few lines again and again…
Assorting words since long, but becoming speechless at that sight!
So profound feelings…so fervent desire… still in distrust, still in despair…
O my soul! O my heart! You answer me at last…
Is this love???
Wow jyots,great !!!
ReplyDeleteseems u r tryin' to understnd love..
very sweet poem..
Very well composed poem :-) U may not be a gr8 lover, as u claim, but u certainly understand the feeling of being in love :-) At least u have expressed that feeling beautifully here :-)
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ReplyDeletehey jyots very swt lines.
ReplyDeleteit's my fav poem n i love this....